Hihi,thx for viewing my interface design. Hope ya can drop comment!
first page
character introduction
Character introduction
Game
The end
first pagecharacter introductionCharacter introductionGameThe end1.What u like the most about my design?
A. art style
B. typography
C. color combination
D. theme
E.character design
F.erm..no actually
G.everything
2.Would u understand wat the story about through my design?
A.yes
B.no, why?
3.Did you feel the design match the theme?
A.yes
B.no, why?
4.Did you feel any consistency of the design for every page?
A.yes
B.no, which part?
5.Please give your comment on my design thx.
13 comments:
1. character design.
2. No. Text can't be read due to it's size.
3. Yes
4. Yes
5. It is quite impressive. However the story line is unknown as the text is unreadable.
1. art style
2. i cant open in a bigger size to read. so, i hv no answer for this.
3. yes..
4. ... ....
5.i think ur back and next can put in more creative way.ur illustration v nice o.. live trace?
1.E character design
2. I cant enlarge it to read
3. Yes
4. Yes
5. Overall is quite interesting,
but the game there if "just
look" can't attract eyes view.
The colors, red and black,em...
mayb other colors u can try.
great work! So are you just planning to be only two colours in your interface design? I think is too red.I think that is your style of making it la...feel romantic. Anyway, I think you did well for your design.
1.art style
2.No,it is hard to read
3.yes
4.yes
5.I like the design,even from the surface,it look like very romance and surrounded by love. but the gal whom holding the rose,actually is be hurted,feel the hidden sadness behind the scene.
1, art style (i like ur first page~!)
2,erm..i cant really read the font =P
3,yes~!not bad!
4,yes
5,hehe..erm...if can add more 3D feel at ur title is more good gua..hehe.i like ur rose at first page..got 3D feel~!wakaka~!the color is very nice and i wan to add my personal idea~if me i will put the title of the pic in same spot~!cause oh..for me la..title of a pic is very important and i will not put here or put there..hehe..juz my idea la..jia you and add more nice product of urs in this blog ya~!^^
1.What u like the most about my design?
D. theme
2.Would u understand wat the story about through my design?
B. No - maybe you should screenshot the full 800x600 version of the image so we can all read? But otherwise I'm not sure what your story is about.
3.Did you feel the design match the theme?
A. Yes
4.Did you feel any consistency of the design for every page?
A. Yep.
I don't really know what your story is about. :( Can't read. But from here I can say that your font for the storyline and even character description is a little difficult to make out to read. Maybe you could use a less cursive font? For big bodies of text, cursive fonts are hell for the eyes, lol.
:D Maybe you could use different shades of red or add another colour. Currently it's just too... 'jeng jeng!', you know? Too bright. The red is too prominent and strong and is a little too contrasting with the black. Maybe if you could blend it a little...
1.a
2.is it about the love story? because feeling romantic.
3.a.ok la..
4.I think your whole design is too red already.is it only one colour?but i like your flow and your style.
overall, i think is fine for every things.nice!
I plan not to answer any questionaire as it only bind my desire to comment.
Hmm, i liked your character design. Its simple while being in a tri-tone version. Its simply great!
I've found your first page to have little problem. The rose on bottom left corner too hoghly saturated. It could be toned down to a more soft and gentle tone..pink or mild red to re-enhance the whole feel to a different stage.
Frankly, the whole mood of your story portrays a somehow spooky feel. The high intensity red and pure black combination may be the main culprit for this.
If this story is ment to be scary , then u've gotit!
If it is ment to be lovely and romantic, Oh no...wrong go!
Don't worry, things could be changed in just a little adjustment. The font on the main page is a bit intriguitn. Gothic styled font may be your very preferrence (can be noticed as u used it for your blog page's main pict too)Somehow not for this, try some other...more cursive types maybe, display characteristics of elegance that aliased towards roses as what they are.
Try posting different alternative colour combination for ppl's preferences, audience's comments will get you even closer to what is better for your UI!
Good work and go on ! hope we all will be completing our UI to out fullest before Wed!
1)e and c
2)a
3)a
4)i dunnoe la
5)i like yr story
1.D theme~
2.B. No.
3.A. Yes
4. A. Yes~.
5. wow~jie yee jie~ yuan lai u so lady one oh~ faster find a bf..ok ok, bac 2 comment~ ur design i think it s special, cus i seldom c dis kind of interface, but i duno wat ur storyline is, so..cant talk much la ok? yup, dat vector gals veli nice~
1. D, E
2. cant read the story yet, hope you can enlarge the pics.
3. A
4. A, yes although the layout changes from page to page, there's a consistency in the elements used such as the frames.
5. can try combining with more colors? or else gradients to bring out the characters / rose petals. also i feel that the red used is a bit ganas. hehe.
hey~ pretty good!!
long time no c!! rmb me?
how r u recently?
keep in touch ya~
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